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szut

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A one into two bathroom remodel proposal, mostly Podium Browser materials, with a few tweaks.

Thanks for your comments!

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Hey Szut, welcome! This is pretty nice, I think it shows the design very clearly.

I'm not sure I would have cropped it that tightly, but that's just me.  And maybe some thickness on the ceiling and floor would have helped the presentation.  Still, nice image!

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Justin is absolutely right about the cropping. There is thickness to the ceiling and floor, but the cropping of the image makes this difficult to see, along with the fact that the cut plane colour is so similar to the ceiling.

I think the viewpoint is a little high. It looks to me as if it is level with the top of the mirrors, when for eye level it ought to be lower than that.

The main issue with this image (if there can be said to be an issue) is that the mirrors are reflecting an empty scene because the back has been cut away from the model. 

I'm not quite sure how to improve this...

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@justinslick & @bigstick, thanks for the comments they are very appreciated. I'll work on the viewpoint and add "reflections" to the mirrors (great point!). Materials need some work too, and the towels look odd to me. I will try to get more of the sectioned part in so that's it's easier to understand.
Thanks a lot!
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I like it! Welcome to the community! Great place to learn and improve, here are my comments:

 

the "buttons" for he toilet would be better on top or bellow the trim of the tiles or even in the center, pick one or check which one is better

IMHO I would change the texture for the poche on the walls and windows a little more black but it's is just personal taste

Also, extra care in thinking about the marble divisions always try to match lines (niche with lines and faucets etc., everything is better aligned somehow)

 

I would put something back of the camera just to make some reflections on the mirrors (maybe the other half of the room, separated only to emulate the reflections)


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@arqcova, thank you for your comments and critique. They're very welcome. I have made some changes and adjustments, added reflections, plus I've changed the poché to show structure. Not sure how I feel about it, though. Still looking for a great travertine texture.

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Here's another image from the same project:

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Thanks again for all your comments and suggestions!
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