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wabisabi_shoji

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guys here's the latest rendering of the same scene. i opted to keep
it as close as possible to the intended color scheme. so as to
simulate realism. i hope this is an improvement from the radioactive
version i earlier sent.


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Me like.. Much more toned down and better looking( the Geiger counter is barley clicking!). Did you increase the quality? I can see the saw marks in the floor boards! This version of that scene is a keeper...I think!




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nope. same quality, in fact same raw output. just a different ps touch-up
technique i used. my quality is at 3/4 and smooth at half bar. always.
im trying out different photo-editing techniques to generate different moods.
but raw file is still from the same output.

thanks. im happy you liked this one.


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Good render but that floor is still bugging me.

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wabisabi, this latest one is much better! Great work.
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thanks zem. here's another project im doing. the concept is an airport terminal. just wanna get feedback on the blending quality. there was a lot of post production done in photoshop. and the image cooked for 4+ hours just to get the raw.

heres the sim.



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Wow. That image has a very artistic quality to it, nice futuristic industrial look. I like the light coming from the opening in the roof. The upper part of the image with the steel frame is the most successful to me - the lines are sharp and the Podium background supports them nicely. It's excellent. The middle where the light is coming down is a bit too blurry in my opinion. And the lines in the lower left corner are quite blurred. Is that intentional?
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yes it is. i applied a multidirectional blur filter. just so realistically the light gets diffused by distance from source. that was intentional. also used an overlaying of gradient blurs to create the sense of dreamy depth. the cubic rectangular blurs are the volumes of the luggage being sold. ive made them phantoms so the volume is scene, but no detail.

heres the latest of that same view. ive developed the design since last night. this one already has some lighting and reflection figured in. the truss has a bank of china aesthetic to it.



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This second image is much improved. Lighting is better and the textures on that wall panel are really nice. It has a nice warmth, despite having an industrial look. Awesome!
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I like the last one a lot...now if you had the tail of a boeing outside the window, (realistic ...like a photo) it would look excellent.

 

just an opinion...use it, lose it.


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