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archy033

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Hi all! This's my first post for interior render here. All comments and critics are welcome   (I'm not good at English but I'll try) Model with su and render with podium.

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Nice render for your first attempt. Just a few small things ...your pillows on the bed look like the are flat..a few omni burn marks on the ceiling near the entrance like their should be fixtures there of some sort making the light circles..but their isn't! Overall, a great job!

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Thanks David .I agree with u for the light .but can anyone told me how to avoid burnt spot on the ceiling and wall. I'm try many method but it doesn't work .

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first of all, i would like to commend you on your inrterior. i like it. although there are some tweakings here, indeed you have produced a very nice image.

as for lighting:

1. read the tips and trick tutorial, a lot of things explained there.

2. move them farther away from the surface

3. lower the light slider

4. if you are using omni, make the omni plane smaller in area.


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