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chrispph

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hi guys! happy easter to everyone. just a simple interior scene.



comments and suggestions are welcome. [smile]

shaggy2802

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nice render - one thing jumps out at me is the hinges on the folding doors.  They look a bit too flat and shiny and could do with some indentations and screw holes / fixings.

lighting within the room looks great but the external image could maybe have a touch more yellow to match the interior light colour.

love those chairs!


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I really like this render.

I agree with Steve (shaggy2802) you need more definition on the doors, maybe a faint line overlay would help.

The natural lighting is very nice and your background trees.

Its a shame those doors open onto a wall, would be nice if there was more garden?

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chrispph

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Originally Posted by shaggy2802
nice render - one thing jumps out at me is the hinges on the folding doors.  They look a bit too flat and shiny and could do with some indentations and screw holes / fixings.

lighting within the room looks great but the external image could maybe have a touch more yellow to match the interior light colour.

love those chairs!




thanks @shaggy2802!
chrispph

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Originally Posted by Natstar
I really like this render.

I agree with Steve (shaggy2802) you need more definition on the doors, maybe a faint line overlay would help.

The natural lighting is very nice and your background trees.

Its a shame those doors open onto a wall, would be nice if there was more garden?

regards,
Nat


thanks @nat! didn't have much time to tinker on the door... just used them straight from the browser [smile]
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