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ravenclawdesign

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just a simple render for a client.

any feedback welcomed.

Interior Kitchen to Lounge.jpg 

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Nice render [smile]

The perspective is a bit extreme, and I'm not convinced by the material on those pendant light fittings.

To improve, use the glass material that I uploaded for arqcova and remove all the fill lighting.

There is something not quite right about the lighting. It looks like the sun is coming trough the windows on the left, and bouncing off the back of the dining chairs onto the wall behind.

However, if you look at the ceiling-mounted light by the TV, you can see that the shadow is cast from the right.

This isn't right - it looks like you have added additional light sources, and overdone them.

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Hello! returning to the forums after a lot of work, this is the file raven:


http://supodiumforum.websitetoolbox.com/file?id=3143495


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hi guys ,

thanks argcova, much appreciated man... my sincere apologies for not replying sooner. havent been on the forum in ages. new job.

Again, thanks man.
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